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Since English isnt my strong, i wount be able to use all those professional words and stuff, but first of all I like it, since you are using soft colors, like if it were "pastel" drawing. At the first moment i felt too much white in it, but since it's a grey t-shirt, it does make a good combination, still you could try to make another "warmer" version with more yellow tones in it just to experiment. As for the weight, i feel it a little bit heavy, so as one of possible solutions you might probably want to lift it a bit. Just a bit, and maybe tiny to your right toward the small pink heart <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Well, i guess this is it. Remember to always experiment as much as possible. Your mind might tell you quite loudly when you finally get to the right choice so you wount even need any more advices. Advices are great indeed, but sometimes you better listen to your own internal voice and not to all those different opinions people could give you. Well, this is getting too general, so i better stop and wish you the best of luck. Should i mention that you've alredy got my vote? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Cheers